"Aha!," she said, in triumph over what she found, "It appears that you were kicked out and supposed to leave the hotel at 9 am sharp." Ruth meant what she said when she said she would get a restraining order, which she did, and to make extra sure the family couldn't go to her, she packed up everything and moved to somewhere in Alaska. Hope you enjoy. Lisa: That's the last time I ever fall for such phone-baloney! SQUIRRELS WIN! Sam: Luna, I got your letter. Computer typing was heard yet again and, after a few moments. (Lincoln, without hesitation, hugs her, with the rest of the sisters joining in for another group hug. The parents were shown to be hypocritical at the end, telling their children to behave when they cause the whole family to be kicked out and then tricking them into going to Aunt Ruth's and letting them have a nice weekend at a homemade spa (yes I'm aware the Aunt Ruth thing happens more or less unintentionally but come on, it doesn't really make a massive difference). He's just really mad, isn't he? "And," Lori said, as she approached her parents, "if you want to act like irresponsible teenagers. NO!" Slamming the sliding glass door shut, he turned around and glared at everyone in the room. "Yeah, I guess that's fair," Luna said, "we made a promise with you and we couldn't keep it." As the last of the guests ran away, Leni, the blonde girl that one of the guys mentioned earlier, came around the corner and saw her family in the spa. I WISH YOU'D NEVER EXISTED!!!!! She's trying to say she was wrong, but her mouth is pathologically incapable of saying those words. I'm giving it a Teen rating, because while there is no serious violence in this story, there are still some moments that might not be comfortable for youngsters to have to read (primarily shouting and lots of it). I'll never be able to play games the best way again! Lincoln: Which is why Im making you all wear squirrel suits for the rest of your lives, [They all gulp. I came to your game to support you, not just because you threatened me with your bat. "They're not the only guilty ones," Lynn, the girl in red with brown hair tied in a ponytail, responded back with, in a bit of wise-cracking tone, "Yesterday, Lana and I broke the elevators. You are about as braindead as you're heartless! "Good riddance." "No need," another voice was heard saying, everyone turned and saw Jeffrey, the spa manager standing in the doorway, glaring at all of them, "I got staff to pack all of your stuff into your bags and bring it downstairs when I was informed you were still here by Maddie, one of my front desk clerks." Trying explaining that!" Find out what other deviants think - about anything at all. No Such Luck part 2. You kicked me out of your lives, now I'm kicking you all out of mine!! Upload stories, poems, character descriptions & more. They suddenly feel saddened, guilty, broken and worried. Lisa: I was a fool to fall for it all, I swear. Brawl in the family alt ending8. You love baseball. Lincoln is scared, expecting her to beat him up, but instead she wraps her arms around his neck and begins to cry), Lynn: (with a broken voice) "I'm so sorry Lincoln! Lucy: "He's actually doing pretty good." Lynn: [nerviously] "Yeah, decent enough. It centers around an Alternate Timeline involving the events of the infamous episode "No Such Luck", where the Loud family thought that Lincoln was bad luck. Of course, it's not like the parents could them there anyway. My family learned not to let something as stupid as superstitions get to them and tear us apart, and I learned to just be honest about things like this instead of convincing them about something ridiculous just take a break from going to certain events. Angus: Oh do tell. Honey, we're back. Lucy: (shedding tears) Me too. The siblings looked down after she said this, making the parents feel even more lousy than they already did. Even though Lincoln was the one who brought this on himself. "We don't have a hotel room anymore," Lincoln said, in a very angry tone that the parents weren't used to seeing. I plan to do some more humorous parodies and some other stories that aren't going to be as serious as this one, so be on the lookout for that. #The loud house #lincoln loud #lori loud #leni loud #luna loud #Luan Loud #Lynn Loud #Lucy Loud #lana loud #lola loud #lisa loud #lily loud #the loud house headcanons #the loud . They are looking very heartbroken.). Perhaps i was wrong to fall for such a deception, even for my age group. When the officer entered the room, he was shocked at what he saw. "Sigh. Nobody wanted to answer, but they knew things would get uglier if they didn't, so, Luna made the decision to walk slowly to the door and open it just enough to see who's out there but not to let them in. (Lincoln is sitting on the back porch while his family is at the game, looking pretty mad. the family opens the door to see a ticked off Lincoln. Luan: Yeah, our luck has just run out! Whenever you fell like you need a break, you're free to take a rain check. Ive come to many grave-digging events and cemeteries with you! ", Lola: "Don't try to fool us! What do you think, Pep? Nosuchluck Stories - Wattpad This time, it's the infamous "No Such Luck". I just got so mad, that I stopped thinking and gave him a stupid idea and made us all push him away and lose almost everything. Fund your creativity by creating subscription tiers. "Lori!," Lynn Sr. yelled, "You should better then to stop suddenly in traffic!" While this Season 2 Loud House episode might not be as bad as 'Brawl in the Family' or 'No Such Luck,' it's up there. Luna: That was rockin'. Lola added, shouting. Someone at front desk please respond." "What she said is, that you two are grounded for two months and you can only leave this house to head to work or to go to the supermarket." (Inhales, then exhales) "I. She pointed to the back row of seats. Mentioning their Aunt Ruth's bunions caused the siblings to gag, before returning back to normal and glaring at their parents. QUIET! He quickly throws the squirrel suit into a rubbish bin.). This confused everyone even more, until Lincoln started putting 2 and 2 together. ", Baseball Announcer: "Just look at our poor squirrels! Lincoln: But you were all so gullible and stupid! "Now I want an explanation," the man started with, as he stomps a few steps toward them, "As to all of this. But the woman did, "That your parents were caught skinny dipping after hours? Felix got up to see the siblings storming downstairs, ready to give their parents a piece of their mind without a care for who or what gets broken in the process. YOU ARE NOT BAD LUCK!!! Leni asked, an eyebrow raised, confused. Find out what other deviants think - about anything at all. Not you or Lucy. I hate boring science lectures! Well thanks [Sam then kissed Luna on the cheek. Our family wouldn't be a family without-. They were upset and disappointed, their kids promised them they wouldn't cause any problems but they did. No one said anything, not the siblings, not the obnoxious guys, not Felix, not the woman on the other end, just silence. Everyone turned to the doorway and saw the Loud kids standing there, red with rage and ready to destroy. Look, I see sweaty footprints! Lynn Sr.: Son..we didn't mean to..we just.we were wrong to-. And then, as quickly as it appeared, the noises disappeared. Rita: Honey! Lynn: Stop being such a baby and just put that suit back on! So expect a bill in the mail." She smiled as Lincoln took it. The Loud House: Suite and Sour (Alternate Ending) - DeviantArt My first story is done. All rights belong to Nickelodeon. I hate that you sold my bed and everything I had! Upload your creations for people to see, favourite, and share. But Lynn Jr. yelled, "SIT DOWN!" Share your thoughts, experiences, and stories behind the art. Lincoln and Lucy hung their heads in shame and embarrassment. His sisters join too and put Lynn in her place. We don't need to get violent here. Sell custom creations to people who love your style. The Loud House Re-write #1-No Such Luck Add to Favourites By jgodzilla1212 Watch Published: May 10, 2020 75 Favourites 101 Comments 31K Views (It begins right after Lincoln tells Lily why he can't attend to Lily's play date and he bumps into Lisa) Lisa: >scoffing< Pshaw, There's no such thing as bad luck, there's only science, all else is hooey. She shouted that last part at the top of her lungs. (The family submerge, coughing up water, covered in seaweed and muck, their sunnies, hats and sandals floating in the water and their swimsuits in tatters. (They smile, Rita comes over to hug him and rest of them except Lynnjoin in for a group hug. Lisa responded with in her genius talk. It spawned dozens of fanfics about it, and caused his whiny fanbase to go haywire on the sisters. Bobby: Well, I hope her legs are capable of making up for it. Lucy: This was all just a complete tragedy and not in a good way. I certainly am not! Maybe I should just quit the team. *Later in the Duke's room, Lincoln approaches Angus* Angus: Ah Lincoln, What's seems to be on your mind? Lucy: Helping a brother who helped me. Share your thoughts, experiences, and stories behind the art. Lucy: But..but you wanted us to believe it. Ruth responded back, clearly mad too. I wonder if the windows are locked?" Rushing to the balcony door, he opened it, getting the girl's attention. None of the kids wanted to talk to their parents and the parents didn't know what to say to their kids. "Hi, Aunt Ruth," Lola said, in a fake sweet tone, "it's your niece Rita's kids." Literature. We're supposed to be here until tomorrow. Lucy: Lincoln, stop! Unfortunately, they were not quick enough and, in a swift moment, the four were launched into the room across the hall, landing in a painful pile on the floor. ", (Vanzilla is parked in the driveway. Especially Miss. It was never fun but I'm glad it's over." ", "Can I just say that I was only out there because I was accidentally locked out." YOU ROCKED IT, LYNN-SANITY! They got their answer when, suddenly, the door the spa was kicked open by someone's shoe. I hate softball! Lola finished with. She hoped the kids would say something, but all they got were grunts of disbelief. And we're sorry, but it's been so long since your father and I had time, real time, to ourselves and I guess we got carried away." Lana: You know, all of a sudden, I really hate myself! No Such Luck / Frog Wild. "I'm not sure," Felix responded with, "I've got two groups of people saying they have one of our hotel rooms at the same time. Immediately, all the kids started shouting at the parents and, as they did so, the other guests and employees in the spa took this opportunity to escape, they didn't want to stay and watch mayhem unfold. You going to dress me up as a chipmunk or a donkey!? Maybe I should just stop playing softball for a while. I was stupid to believe in luck and to rely on it. ", [The sound of the ball getting hit by the bat is heard and the rest of Lynn's team runs the remaining bases. HATE ME FOREVER!!! She told the kids that their parents caused them to get kicked out, she told them what they did and, in a sense, she was responsible for the kids' destructive rampage. Share your thoughts, experiences, and stories behind the art. No such luck: alternate ending 2 by iann28 on DeviantArt "Not until tomorrow," Lincoln replied, confused as to why he was asking this. Learn more. 'What did he mean there's a massive storm heading her way?' Putting the phone on speaker, they waited for her to pick up the phone. but I just really wanted to get it off my chest. Everything is going wrong with the Squirrels today. helluvaboss. The kids, of course, still had some demands to give their parents. ", [It's revealed to be Lincoln in the runabout costume], Lincoln:[to the viewers] "My plan is simple: I watch the game in disguise, and when the Squirrels win, everyone will see I'm not bad luck. Rita: Okay Lincoln! WE MAKE EVERYTHING WORSE!!! Lynn Sr.: He wrecked our trophy case to!? UPDATE: 20/04/2018- the next chapter has been written I just need to correct some thing's from this chapter. While they were still upset about their parents' behavior and getting them kicked out of an awesome hotel, they understood why they did what they did and understood that they shouldn't had forced their parents to take them on their vacation. Lincoln: (points to the window) "The window. [In stepped David, Winston, Skippy, Silas, Paige, Francisco, Benny, Sam, Chaz, and Bobby. We let superstitions get to us, and we did something no family should ever do. Lincoln blushed and hugged Ronnie Anne. We need to follow them, they have to be Lincoln's! They all shouted. Was the thought on her mind. Lisa: A terrible case of state of mind if ever I saw one. We were given the room." Rita: Kids, your friends are here. Lisa: (sighs) Obviously one that needs our cerebrums and mental spirits adjusted. nosuchluck loudhouse Well here is an alternate ending to No Such Luck that ends on a happy note. Lincoln grabs 11 squirrel mascots and put them on his parents and sisters, minus Lily.]. Don't fight now! I pull off one little trick and you guys all flip out over some nonsense like a bunch of gullible buffoons! As they were trying to relax, stomping and shaking were heard, causing everyone in the spa to wonder what was going on. IT'S ALL MY FAULT!!! "And mom should know better," Lori shouted back, glaring at her mother specifically, "Then to take us to that woman!" luckily, it was unlocked, he opened it and went inside.) ", Baseball Announcer: "I think you're rubbing off on me, Pep. We really are just a bunch of chickens Lynn: Fine! While we do so, sit on the couch and DON'T MOVE!" Lincoln: I said NO! ", Lisa: "And if it's any consolation, you weren't the only one who should've thought about what you were doing. Lincoln: That's what i always say. Just tell us and well let you skip it. I got to find somewhere to hide! Lana: What did you expect us to do Lincoln? Upload stories, poems, character descriptions & more. Luna: I can't believe we made him feel as if we can't feel anymore or that we don't love and care for him. ", Luna: (with a sad look on her face) "No. Reacting to The Loud House (Fanfic) - TV Tropes (She hugs Lincoln again), Lincoln: "Thanks Lynn. And he did not look happy. (Luna gasps) You all dont quite grasp the concept! 5 months of research ruined. Today I'm doing a new story called 'Hall Monster Linka,' as you can tell this a story that features Linka Loud and her brothers. "Gross and immature, if you ask me," Lola said, also glaring at her parents. No such Luck: Repair not Revenge, a loud house fanfic | FanFiction Anyway, as the title suggests, this is an alternate ending fanfic for Loud House Season 2 episode "Suite and Sour." Lincoln yelled, "WE HATE YOU!" Luna, Luan, Lola and Lisa were just about ready to ram these three rude jerks with the couch in the room. No Such Luck Aftermath - Moving Out - The Loud House Fanon Wikia Some sisters those ghouls are. loud house no such luck alternate ending fanfiction The students of Royal Woods elementary were anxiously awaiting in line to get their yearbooks. ", Lynn: (smiles, more tears come down her eyes,) "What did I do to deserve a brother like you?" Lori yelled. "AND WE ESPECIALLY HATE HAVING TO LOOK AT THOSE BUNION INFESTED FEET OF YOURS! ", Lincoln:[to the viewers] "Maybe I can move into Lisa's fallout shelter. So, I plan to rectify that. "She's got a million cats that enjoy scratching us like crazy," Lucy said. [Later, Lincolns room is unlocked and his furnature was back. I'm supposed to be the most special Loud of all. Directors Kyle Marshall (segment Frog Wild) Chris Savino (segment No Such Luck) Writers Chris Savino I only told Leni, Luan, Lana, Lola and Lily. You're all just pure wastes of life! He brought the talkie down to his level and said into it, "Wait. And with that the parents ran into the room and closed the door. We wont! [Later, Lincoln and his family were sitting in the living room when the doorbell rang. Leni: WE DON'T DESERVE LOVE OR THIS TRIP TO THE BEACH!!!! How convenient for me. Leni: Linky.(sniffles).please don't do this to us. Lynn Sr.: Son..we never stopped loving you..we do care about you Lori: Don't hurt us like this..we're your familywe want you to be with us. Lana: We didn't mean to ruin your life..(sniffles).we just wanted to avoid bad luck..we're so sorry we went about it all wrong Luna: We get it bro.you were never bad luck..we ruined everything for youthere is no such thing as luckwe'll never live this down.. Lola: You can't hurt your own family like this.. Lincoln: You all hurt me first! Especially with the ending, so I created this story to give it a better ending. It was wrong of me to blame you for my failure and call you bad luck! And she knew it wasn't about any massive gathering of one group for some kind of event because she would've been notified way ahead of time. ", [Margo takes a swing and flings herself into the umpire and the bat hits her helmet. We are no longer grounded to the room. (Lisa turns to him) Whatever happened to Woman of Science, huh!?! Instead he found comfort in being hugged by Leni, glaring at her parents as she did so. They thought that if they did or said something that this man didn't like, he would turn them to stone with his glare. Lynn Sr. bit his lip for a moment, rubbed the back of his head with hand, and then sighed, "It might take a while and it might not be easy, but I'm certain we can regain their trust." Its a stupid mascot costume! Also please don't flame me. Fund your creativity by creating subscription tiers. Looking up from the soaking wet floor, the man said, in an unamused tone, "No. Lana: Gee. Luna: Bro, why you so upset? Understood?!" Kick the . *, Lincoln: It's not fair. ", Rita: (with a broken voice) "We're so sorry Lincoln! I MESSED UP!!! he turned to the three men, who started sweating nervously, afraid of what would happen to them if they didn't say anything. Reacting to The Loud House is an ongoing series of The Loud House and The Casagrandes fics written by J Tom (or JTom09) in which many characters from both shows watch episodes of said shows. A Happy Ending New Reading List. Theres no need to shout. Whats wrong? ", (after a few seconds of silence, Lincoln smiles at them), Lincoln: "I forgive you." Lincoln asked his parents. (breaks from the hugs) *sighs* "I'm sorry for lying. "Wait, what are you saying?" The Loud House Encyclopedia is a FANDOM TV Community. "Lynn? i certainly didn't expect something like that, but i guess curiosity must be fed. After a few seconds, the same pounding noise was heard yet again, this time even louder. ", Pep:[dully] "Oh, I have that effect on people. Luna spots Lincoln). Everyone in the room went silent, stood still, afraid to make a move or a noise. Lincoln: (to the viewers) "Well, looks like everyone learned something. Lynn sat next to her and wrapped his arm around her shoulder, in an attempt to comfort her. More information No Such Luck - Lucky Carol by TriassicLane More like this House Cartoon Cartoon Fan Cartoon Shows (Both glare at each other) First you threaten me with your lousy pop stick of a baseball bat to make me come to a disgusting game thats nothing but a waste of time, than you blame me for your loss, than you help ruin my life, than youre too stupid to listen to my confession and admit that you were wrong and than at another stupid game you dont even make it up to me and you make me into some silly object! WE DESERVE TO BE HURT!!!! You all are really, really bad luck! Find out what other deviants think - about anything at all. ", Lincoln: "Well Luna, we all make mistakes. Just because of superstitions?! Luan: (tearful) We'll never be able to show our faces in public again. Lincoln: Girls! This whole trip their parents were telling them to behave and they got grounded when they didn't, but now they're learning that they did something to cause them to be kicked out of the hotel after only one day. The worst part is, they had no argument against this. Rita stood up and heads to the door. They were thinking that they should've told their kids no and that they were going to stay at Aunt Ruth's for the weekend. They started running towards them as fast as possible, when suddenly, the sound of a fist pounding against the door is heard. ), Lincoln: But you know what!? Lynn Sr. and Rita wanted to say something, but saw the glares on their kids' faces and knew that they wouldn't get anywhere arguing. They notice the huge mess of items in the yard and are horrified.). My disgust for them is almost as strong as Edwin's lust for blood. The Loud House Fanfiction: No Such Luck PM1's Version the loud house no such luck alternate ending deviantart (she comes down into the living room and whistles loudly) FAMILY, DOWN HERE NOW!!! Lynn Sr.: I can't believe we messed up so bad like this! Loud House Alternate Ending: Out of the Picture by . Making the Grade / Vantastic Voyage. I'm not. (The family gets more and more heartbroken as he continues to rant.). (She storms out of his room and into the hallway. Fund your creativity by creating subscription tiers. It was against the law. I promise I won't be absent all the time, just once in a while. He managed to, but with a twist. Lori finished with. Uh-uh, I'm nothaving it. "Wait," Lori interrupted with, "How could our parents get us kicked out just for taking a late night dip?" Pulling out his walkie talkie, he said, "This is Hotel Officer Mooresfield. Lincoln: Now THAT'S bad luck for you, you brainless nitwits!! Summary: Taken from the episode 'No Such Luck'. "WHENEVER WE VISIT YOU WE ARE MISERABLE!" Lincoln then explains to the viewers that with ten sisters, his schedule is always filled up, and . The way the security officer said, 'Right now,' made Luna nervous, it was typically the tone of voice used when someone was in very serious trouble. Hearing that made the parents sigh in disappointment, they should've known their kids would break things and hoped the bill wouldn't be that much, but also knew that odds were that the bill was going to be massive. EVER!! Lincoln: Stop it! I just hurt Lynn! "WELL, NOW THAT I KNOW HOW YOU KIDS FEEL ABOUT ME! I can't believe they said they'd tease you for eternity. turns her attention to Lincoln) "Get out! I hate that you do nothing but ruin other people's lives, including one of your own! I was being selfish!. I heard you scream! Rita asked. They go flying, screaming in terror and splash into the seawater.). Because of this, Lincoln sneaks his way out of the kitchen, and next to the staircase. ", Lucy: "We don't care, we'll watch anything you want. ", Baseball Announcer: "The windup, the pitch. They were both very nervous and very terrified of their kids right now. But right now, ive had it! The family sees this and gasps in shock.). What's going on here?! Lincoln: (marches up to Lynn) Straight from you, you big bully! ", Lynn: Oh Lincoln. Despite the pain his body was in, Felix grabbed his walkie talkie and said, "Maddie." We don't know what we were thinking! Rita: Sweetie, calm down. Lori said afterwards, knowing that everyone would've been confused by her talk. Two more squirrels collide into each other and miss the catch. They knew they not only had the bill from the hotel to worry about, but also the possibility of getting sued. Felix asked, "Can you tell me what exactly caused these kids to be kicked out?" Years after his death, Lincoln is given the opportunity to see how his sisters are doing. He had a glare on his face and he was tapping his foot on the ground repetitively, showing that he was serious. With that, the parents just held each other for the remainder of the night, promising to do whatever it took to earn back their children's trust. She was bringing Lincoln her Valentines day card.] The squirrel mascot is dancing a little less energetic than usual. (yet another author interruption: the three obnoxious guys' characters are based on some of the staff that are/were working on the show at the time this episode first premiered, which is what the show did when they made this episode canon, I kept their first names but gave them new last names. The Loud House: No Such Luck Alternate Ending Add to Favourites By HaileyKittydoesart Published: Mar 31, 2021 Favourites Comment 4K Views "I'm not bad luck!" Lincoln said in a megaphone, he was done with sleeping outside and eating acorns to survive. As she started getting cleaning supplies to try and restore the lobby to a sense of glory, Maddie thought to herself, 'If the kids did this to the lobby on their way to find their parents. Lola: Hey, Lincoln . Now, let me make this clear! Let's go! MLP - Twilight Sparkle, Applejack and Pinkie. Theres no need for such vile, hateful behaviour, elder brother! The Louds. loud house alternate ending deviantart - segiteknoloji.com They kick and punch and claw at each other for several minutes until Lincoln picks Lynn up.). "What," Felix said, "what is it?" Eventually, one of them said, "Look officer. "Hotel security came up to the room?!" There's a massive storm heading your way." No Such Luck, No Such Love is a The Loud House fanfic written by SpartanXHunterX which can be read here. And can you please unlock my room for me? But seriously, we made a mess of everything! I hate that you don't care about anyone, but yourselves! They knew that whatever they were going to tell Aunt Ruth, it wasn't going to be good. (Lincoln says nothing to his mother. Lynn Loud steps up to the plate, but with the luck she's been having today, the Squirrels are looking a whole lot like roadkill. Lola: (sniffles) He called us all dummies.and a waste of life. Luan: (starts to cry) He also called us monsters..that we don't care for anyone, but ourselves.. Lana: He did have a point. She walked into the spa and asked, in her usual ditzy tone, "Hey guys? ", Lincoln: "I won't deny that I brought this on myself.
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